Я, конечно, не про в написании творений на английском, поэтому не уверена в корректности языковых форм и т.п. Хотелось бы донести смысл и настроение, вложенное в стих, написанный за полчаса в 4 часа утра
Любая критика и исправления приветствуются
I put you lying far away
And you were breathing with no answer
But where did your soul stay
When I was writing with this pencil?
I know you couldn't fall asleep
Because I've left you then so easy
But I'm here again to see
In autumn sun you lying freezing
New morning comes, are you still here?
Before you tell me we were killed..
Let's take a breath again, my dear
One last for us, but best to feel it